Reading and editing my classmate's writings as well as my own was a good experience. It made a huge affect on me to hear how we sound. Constructive criticism from the teacher and class made me realize many of my strong areas. I am really good with transition words, grammar, and spelling. I am also good with keeping my writing professional and on task, but there's always room for improvement. While reading my classmate's writings I noticed there were many problems with mechanics and spelling; I don't struggle with those areas too often. One of the few weaknesses of mine is getting my ideas down. I tend to get stuck when it comes to brainstorming. Once I get my ideas down everything practically flows. My action plan to help improve my weakness would be to think harder but smarter and also think outside the box.
Chapter 4: 1. 2. The narrator is does not care for Trueblood for the disgusting act he committed on his daughter; The narrator does not like the people at the golden day as well due to them demising his chances for college and being accepted. 3. Old plantations were owned by Caucasians but black slaves were the one's who ran the plantations and did all of the work. The college the narrator attends is ran by Caucasians but the college was established for African Americans. 4. Dr. Bledsoe has achieved power in society by following the expectations that the white's have set and also pleasing them in every way possible. He also did not solely base his actions on what he thought his own people would think of him. 5. Mirrors are things in which a person only sees the outside image, whereas an aquarium is transparent, a person can see straight through and what the aquarium contains inside. The mirror symbolizes the image Dr.Bledsoe and the narrator wears in order to impress super...
Travia I would also have to agree that editing our classmate's writings was a good experience. The experience was very beneficial to help us be more caution of our mistakes when writing. I would also have to agree that your strengths in writing are your transition words, grammar, and spelling according to your paper that I've recently proofread. I believe your action plan to solve your weaknesses is very helpful. Don't worry Travia I feel that you will overcome this weakness in no time.
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